Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the complex challenges faced by society are rapidly changing the way we live. As a result, more and more people are seeking for ideal lifestyles to release such pressure. Some people argue that spending time solitarily is the best way to relax and reduce stress, others think otherwise. Personally, I would totally agree that the best way to relax is spending time with family and friends. The reasons will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First, spending time with friends and families brings pleasure to people, and helps them alleviate their stress in mundane life. With the companionship of acquaintances, one can be able to relieve stress and achieve a state of contentment. My own experience illustrates this reality. Three years ago, I was prepared for the university entrance exam, and bore tons of pressure. The closer the date of the exam approached, the more stressed I became. Fortunately, my friends invited me to an excursion, which changed my entire perspective. Through discourse and activities, we were able to immerse ourselves in a supportive and mutually beneficial environment that allowed me to shed any derogatory emotions and revel in the moment. Eventually, with their unwavering loyalty and comprehension, I overcame the fear of exam and felt serene in the face of life’s undulations.
Second, devoting quality time to being with loved ones can have positive health outcomes, such as reducing stress. anxiety, loneliness and isolation. Scientists point out that human is a social animal requiring others to survive and live better. In a study carried by the National Institute of Mental Health, researchers found that individuals who had more social support tend to had lower levels of stress or anxiety, with the contribution of certain hormones. Moreover, despite the profound impact on mental health, some scholars indicate that such social connections can lead to improved physical health and well-being. Recent researches done in Tokyo University proved that the risk of cancer has proportional relationship with the degree of social isolation. By prioritizing social connections with family and friends, we can improve our overall health.
Nevertheless, some people may assert that spending time with others can make us exhausted. Also, our expenditure on such activities can increase, too. However, by allocating our time for entertaining with friends more rationally, such problems could be eliminated.
In a nutshell, the merits of being sociable, especially in keeping mental health are obvious, even if some tiresome are entailed. Thus, I believe that the best way to relax is spending time with family and friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 716, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... shed any derogatory emotions and revel in the moment. Eventually, with their unwavering loya...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anxiety
...alth outcomes, such as reducing stress. anxiety, loneliness and isolation. Scientists p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36515513126 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91601658951 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575178997613 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9865502274 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.92 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.76 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211523870095 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613447165247 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811949401734 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131979484653 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665151209439 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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