Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a
foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
position.
No one can deny the importance of learning new things at early age. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely thinks that children must learn foreign language at the beginning of their school years. It is my firm opinion that learning before or at the beginning of the school could be really beneficial for children for number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think when children learn at those young age, they are more eager to learn new things and they are motivated to know about everything. They want to become wise like their parents and their sibling therefore, they have a tremendous desire to learn. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was 6, I was at the beginning of my school years and I was fresh and motivated to learn a new things. I enjoy school classes more than anything. I just wanted to know a bit more about everything so I was so focused and tried to concentrate as best as I can. My favourite class at that time was my English class. I loved to do my homework and practice more and more. I guess because I did not have much experience with classes and school that truly made me thirsty for knowledge. As a result I could speak English as good as my first language at that age. For this reason, I believed that it is better to start learning foreign language at that age. It is simply because children are much eager to learn at those early age of their lives.
Secondly, children can learn much faster than grownups and they could take an advantage from that ability. It is so vivid that learning process in children from age 5 to 9 is remarkably high and they can learn almost everything in a short period of time. Drawing from my own experience, when I was 7, I could learn chemistry, math, biology and art at one day. It is so obvious that learning that amount of material could be really tough thing to do but in that age not only I could learn them but also I could practically use them in my homework and especially in my exam. Even in this age is remarkably
unbelievable that I have that amount of mind process at those early age.
In light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that learning foreign language at the first years of school would be beneficial to children because of the fact that they have motivation to learn which is truly vital and as another reason, they can learn much faster because of their high mind performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...re forced to choose, I would definitely thinks that children must learn foreign langua...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... was fresh and motivated to learn a new things. I enjoy school classes more than anyth...
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Line 3, column 870, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at truly made me thirsty for knowledge. As a result I could speak English as good ...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... can learn almost everything in a short period of time. Drawing from my own experience, when I...
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Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my exam. Even in this age is remarkably unbelievable that I have that amount of ...
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Line 8, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f school would be beneficial to children because of the fact that they have motiv...
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Line 8, column 150, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...school would be beneficial to children because of the fact that they have motivation to learn which is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, i guess, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4623655914 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47908956543 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432258064516 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5831450184 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8095238095 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199871240546 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704240128497 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542083560019 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117111683177 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610479052318 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.