Do you agree or disagree: Rather than help children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children do their work independently?
In modern world, more and more things develop quickly by the wheel of time, same as the education. Because the thrive of the education and the teaching quality, more people want to give their children a good education for they can in order to have a good life in the future. For children can absorb the knowledge rapidly, some parents even help their children with their school work; besides, some people think that parent should encourage children to do their own work independently. In my opinion, I think parents are better to teach their children that to do their work independently.
Primarily, let children do the work by themselves will possibly help them to obtain the interest on study. Working independently is not just a way to solve the questions on the paper, but it is also the way to discover the interesting thing in the studying knowledge. During the way children are doing the homework, they will meet some difficult questions. In order to solve these problems, children will be stimulated to use different resources on finding the answers. They will obtain interest when they both search for the answer and solve the problem eventually. Thus, they will obtain the interest on knowledge by these ways. Moreover, interest is the best teacher, having the great interest on study will also help them in the future on the study field, because it may help people to make their future study in college and work in society certain. Once they have a clear goal, they will more easily to know and where should they use their efforts on.
On the other hand, doing the work independently will greatly help children in both their future life and work. Unlike the children who always rely on their parents’ help, children who can independently finish their work will adapt an ability which can do all things independently. This ability will not only benefit them on doing the school works in the future school life; moreover, it will also rudimentarily help them in their life and working field. Because they are totally independent, they will have a strictly regular life. This will help them to order their time, so they can have more time for themselves. On the other hand, the independent ability will help them to be more motive on the work than other who always rely on other. Therefore, they will be more successful than any others.
Although helping children to do their school work sometimes will physically improve their working rate; nevertheless, the excessive helping from parents may destroy a child, because this will let them adapt another ability which is called dependent ability. It means that children will over relying on others, so they cannot work independently. Compare with those who can work independently, they will lose lots of motivation on their life and work in the future. In result, letting children do their work independently may cost more time than helping them, but compare with the benefit they will get for their future, these time will not be called waste.(45min)
In conclusion, for improve their children’s time, people think that helping their children is a much better way to do. For me, this will just destroy’s children’s future and life for give them some “good time” when they was little. For what we have been discuss, combine with the benefit that doing work independently will help them find the interest on study, make the study field certain, and give them a good life in future; let children finish their work by themselves is a better way which I prefer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...of time, same as the education. Because the thrive of the education and the teaching quali...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
... they was little. For what we have been discuss, combine with the benefit that doing wo...
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Line 9, column 418, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ield certain, and give them a good life in future; let children finish their work by them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 35.0 9.8082437276 357% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2938.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 599.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90484140234 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52668678046 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.377295492487 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.9 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8229931513 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.52 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.96 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408356329667 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158975473586 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148654567169 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314232898863 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936480742191 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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