One of the most important social development is the economic growth. It can be said that without economy, the society cannot grow rapidly. However, nowadays there are more and more people appealing that economy growth should be slowed down because of some environmental concerns. From my point of view, I think the point mentioned above is questionable for the following reasons.
To begin with, economic growth actually facilitates and encourages new ways of environment protection. Many people nowadays may hold the view that with the economic growth, factories and heavy industries will be built to adapt to the rapid growth of market. They think that this would seriously contaminate the air and release greenhouse gasses and inhalable particles into the atmosphere. Nevertheless, it should be noted that the growth of the economy promotes innovation and boost the development of science and technology. With the basis of funding come from economic growth, scientists are supported by the government to exploit new ways to improve the environment.
In addition, the development of a society cannot accomplish without the help of economy. It is not exaggerated to say that economy is just like the heart of the society. Without the growth of economy, human will live a life just like primitive tribe. It costs about 1 million years for humans to transform from the hunter-gathering lifestyle to sedimentary lifestyle and 100 years to transform from the first industrial revolution to the second one. As your can see, economic growth promotes and accelerates the progress of human development and evolution, even though it has some side effects on the environment. As a result, if a society wants to thrive and prosper, it should put the economic growth in the first place.
In a nutshell, based on the reasons that the rapid growth of economy facilitates and encourages new ways of environmental protection and society development cannot leave without the help of economic growth, I strongly disagree that economy should be slowed down by concerns about environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26807228916 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93301585656 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496987951807 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5340196974 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279585879739 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859752785523 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818637429463 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192276793701 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804737341531 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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