Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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...e in the following essay. First of all,Enjoy the life in an a healthy way to maintai...
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...ntain the emotional and fisical balance.In the celebrities cases that balance is a...
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...t.This person wants to scaped from them.He speeded the cars so fast that, his car ...
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... the public pictures of that. Secondly,important people are expose to be harm by others....
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... harm by others. We have to respect the others life recognizing when actors and athlet...
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...hletes just wants to be a normal person.Dispite to some celebrities likes to be controv...
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...ikes to be controversial and emblematic.For instead, i was walking around in poblix...
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...ntroversial and emblematic.For instead, i was walking around in poblix market and...
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...in a colorful pants and a black glasses.Imediatly the others start comments about her.For...
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...tly the others start comments about her.For my surprise was madonna the queen of po...
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...y surprise was madonna the queen of pop.She was there acting like a regular and com...
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...ctive she seem happy doing some errents.But once someone recognize her.She doe s t ...
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...mes is cause to lose their life for ever
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71760797342 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9557876464 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.74696874 48.9658058833 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.666666667 100.406767564 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.1666666667 20.6045352989 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.45110844103 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891266478783 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370780551501 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374384886467 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536678363669 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339918556976 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 11.7677419355 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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