Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The increase in automation will lead to people losing their jobs
According to me increase in automation will not affect the existing jobs of people, in fact it will help produce more jobs in near future. automation is today's world is quite
significant as we need to solve more complex problems such as work on reducing global warming and reduce pollution.
Firstly, let's take an example of the invention of computers. Nearly,25 years back computer was affordable for evertone. However, nowadays computer has become the
bread and butter for many individuals.The automation which is done with the help of computer has produced millions of jobs, for e.g. we have seen a drastic boom in the
information technology department, which has helped us find solutions to problems in healthcare,finance,entertainment and other domain.
Let's take an example of Google, after the invention of computers, Larry Page gave a thought about search engines which helps people gain information at anytime anywhere. This produced
millions of jobs in it world.
Secondly, automation has helped people cut out on unproductive works and focus more on developing new ideas which can create an impact on the society. As we are seeing a big rise in global
warming there is an instant need of creating models which will help us accurately predict the level of pollution in an area so that we can take appropriate measures to cut down pollution.
This model creation process will require a huge man-power and hence generate lots of jobs.As we have also seen that NASA,ISRO and many other space agencies are conducting inter-planetary
missions which will generate lots of jobs to develop higly qualified rockets for precise missions.
As discussed above, development in technology and innovation towards automation is the need of the hour to tackle critical problems such as vaccine development process, reducing pollution.
These problems cannot be solved without the help of the machines which humans have created and to operate those machines we need man-power and hence we will not see a
cut down in jobs. In fact we will always how new ideas can help us enhance the current model and to implement the new ideas we will need people. These are the reasons because of which I
believe increase in automation will not cut down jobs.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The increase in automation will lead to people losing their jobs 58
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The increase in automation will lead to people losing their jobs 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15447154472 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03378304634 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514905149051 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1888679758 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127625898098 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542900783269 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538784557467 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566304875431 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606030052831 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.