Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt, our living environment has important influences on different aspects of our lives such as our lifestyle, careers, and relationships. Some people like experience diverse environments as their homes but others prefer to stay in the first place all their life. Personally, I am of the opinion that it is beneficial for individuals to live in different places. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, being in different cities make us familiar with different cultures. Each country or city has its own customs that have been shown in its religion, foods, languages, and even clothes. If people live in one place all of their lives they do not have the opportunity of knowing this diversity. So it is impossible for them to learn the good points of other cultures. For example, when I was a student my father was a doctor and we had to live in different cities in our country every year. However, our lives were not easy and my parents have difficulties but we could learn many useful things from different people. My mother learned how to cook many delicious kinds of local foods and cookies. Also, I could speak more than three languages and accents. therefore living in different cities was worth for my family.
Secondly, living in different towns makes people able to have extensive relationships and communications. They can interact with their new colleagues and neighbors and find more friends in each place. For instance, as I said my father's job necessitated us to live in different towns. My brother and I were going to school in each town and as a result, we had very good friends in each city. I would not have had such great friends if we had not lived in different towns.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that immigration and living in different places have very advantages for us. This is because we can be familiar with different cultures and learn useful points from them. Also, we can find very good friends in each city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76217765043 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68301658742 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6762253956 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1428571429 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141326688896 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469140600159 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404166812455 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895063985359 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281223186206 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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