Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Research is an important part of our lives. Looking for information is a very effective tool to improve our communities. Some people think it is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet, while others disagree. In my view, it is much better to use the internet. The rationale behind my idea will be elaborated in the next few words.
In order to learn, we must be able to find relevant and useful information.
First, using the internet is more effective. When we use the internet we get the opportunity to reach the most up-to-date information. As printing materials takes a lot of time, this will cause a delay in delivering the information. Moreover, the internet provides more diversity of resources that can enhance the information. For instance, 2 months ago I was doing research in my faculty of medicine with my classmates. We did research about what is called The Broken Heart Syndrome. Surprisingly, we couldn’t find any reliable information in the books as it is a new concept. When we looked at the Pubmed site, which is the biggest database site for medical studies, we found some useful studies about the topic from different countries. Consequently, the internet is better than books for research.
This presentation demanded a lot of research
Secondly, The internet is much cheaper than printed materials. Books require a considerable amount of money for Printing papers, storing in warehouses and shipment fees. All of these fees are not an issue for the internet. Although a lot of research sites require a subscription, it is still much cheaper than books. This is because these sites provide information for millions of studies. Moreover, printing books is consuming a lot of trees and is harmful to nature. For instance, While my years of med school, I used to research from my laptop directly. This helped me a lot to save money. If I were buying every book I had to use, I would spend a huge amount of money. Instead, I only had to pay 30 dollars monthly to subscribe to one site on the internet. When I need some printed books, I used the books in the library. So, the internet is a much better tool for researching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., using the internet is more effective. When we use the internet we get the opportun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.765625 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85271689913 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9118617111 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312649157127 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914971095313 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10105722659 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173382193542 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102948814509 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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