Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to work in a large company than in a small one.
People are different and some of us enjoy quite work environment of a small business while others choose a dynamic job in huge companies. Personally, I prefer to work for a big corporation. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, large companies provide more career opportunities than small ones. This is because they have a myriad of ranks that employees can move through. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Right after graduation from pharmacy school, I was offered a position of a regular pharmacist in a local chain pharmacy. I worked truly hard to show my employers that I was a responsible and valuable employee. In fact, my hirers noticed my effort and in just six months I got a promotion and became a pharmacy manager`s assistant. Not only that, but in one year I was offered a managing position in another pharmacy of the same company. Although independent pharmacies are less stressful to work in, they cannot guarantee a quick career growth to young professionals. That is why I prefer big firms rather than little ones.
Secondly, employment in large companies is tremendously fascinating. These days, competition on the market is enormous and every business endeavors to attract customers by pleasing them with a variety of services. As a result, they develop constantly new programs where employees take an active part, and so their work routine is always diverse. For instance, in the chain pharmacy that I mentioned above, my colleagues and I participate in numerous activities which are aimed to obtain the loyalty of our customers. In this way, we offer them vaccination from infectious diseases and educate and support patients who try to quit smoking or lose weight. By promoting these programs I feel that my professional skills improve. Moreover, chatting with patients and assisting them in their needs is not only interesting but keep me busy and because of that, my workdays go by fast and I am never bored at a workplace. This example illustrates how a job in a large company can be dynamic and enjoyable.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that working for giant corporations is advantageous. This is because this kind of occupation is interesting, and helps employees to excel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99477806789 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99683858812 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597911227154 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1899302109 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9545454545 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143779667837 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407917876233 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467028217893 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786250461279 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275029270904 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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