Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to work in a large company than in a small one. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a personal career plan. people may prefer a small enterprise because of flexibility, agile, and learning multiple skills. On the other side, some people would choose large business for the sake of competitiveness, organization, social network and so forth. If someone asks me which one is better, however the answer is relative and subjective. In my opinion, I definitely agree with the statement, better to work in a huge company and not small one.
well-organization is crucial and essential for an entrepreneur to run business. The organization in the big companies have developed so well that make profit consistently. it’s vital for a freshman who just step in a society to learn things under a well-organized group. The responsibility of each department is clearly defined as well as clearly defined conformity of management. For example, generally, big company which kicks off a project divides and assigns tasks to several relevant departments, such as research, production, sales, law, and so forth. Every unit takes its job and executes in parallel. In this condition, freshman could learn the well-prepared development process of product as well as coordination skills with various departments. In contrast, small business tends to be chaotic, some people even have to do multi-division jobs, like being a secretary and human resource manager simultaneously. it’s adverse to personal career growth..
working in a great company has more chances to expand social network as well as advantageous to interpersonal relationship. Conspicuously, a business with large group has more people to get linked with compared to a small one. For instance, like TSMC, in Taiwan, is the best semi-conductor manufacturer in the world, has more than ten thousand workers. working in this kind of company offers an excellent accessibility to colleagues of diverse field. On the contrary, a small enterprise with fewer workers has less chances to expand interpersonal relationship effectively.
In conclusion, because of well organization and better social network, working in a big business is better than in a small one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4693877551 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32732389874 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6235276337 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213379022242 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063651449052 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085161596589 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157099327497 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681339711489 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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