Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowadays, we are living in a world which changes rapidly day by day. In my opinion, everyone needs to know what is happening around the world. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, knowing the latest events will keep us up to date, so when we are in society, we can communicate with people better. Today's social groups, such as colleagues and friends, are mostly updated because of the vast development of technology. Therefore, when they know everything that happens around the world, and you do not, that does not put a good impression of you in their minds. For example, when I was a freshman at college, I had a friend who was not interested in the latest events such as political or social ones. Once one of my professors asked all of us a question about the newest economy issues, and she did not know anything. Although she was a hard-working student, the professor did not depend on her because of her lack of information.
Secondly, seeing the events and observing their reasons and consequences will lead us to become more knowledgable than before. I believe that nothing happens in this world by chance, and there is always a reason behind everything. In other words, the progress of realizing why something results in something else, make us learn essential factors which we can use in our future life. For instance, again back to when I was In college, we had a commerce class in which we had to follow all the latest news about the economy or politic and reported them to our professor. She believed that knowing this news can prepare us for our future workforce. When I look back to my job promotions through these years, I find out how this fact helped me to improve by just learning from the consequences of events. That is, If anyone wants to become successful in business, they should use every piece of information because sometimes even a single unknown detail can bring about a massive loss of money in companies.
In conclusion, I think people should be aware of the latest events because we need to be updated in society to have a better impression on others and be in touch with them, and knowing the reasons and the results of an event can increase our experience in daily life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64356435644 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58759397589 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54702970297 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6143605732 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210936481121 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651587124701 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618716439934 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130207874703 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253946352111 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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