Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Since the dawn of civilization, education has been having great importance for human beings. Its paramount role has been caused, the parents pay more heed into it. Nowadays, many people debate that parents are more involved and participated in their children' s education. On the contrary, opponents believe parents' attention does not change during history. I firmly concur with the first group' s opinion. I will elaborate on my points of view in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that there were plenty of children in each family. Hence, the parents could not manage their work let alone the education of every child. Now, having fewer children assists parents to monitor efficiently their children. To exemplify, my father has seven siblings and his father was a farmer. As a result, not only did his father not have any attention to their educations but also he wanted them to help him too.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that today parents are knowledgable and educated, as a result, they could extensively help their children in their assignments. The result of the survey in American society revealed the most successful and prosperous persons are who their parents have an academic education. It is crystal clear, if their parents were illiterate, their next generations would not reach the achievements.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that improvement in technology was responsible for this reason. Although technology makes our life easier, more comfortable and provides more facilities for humans, it distracts the children to concentrate on their study. For instance, online games are becoming an unavoidable part of some children' s lives. So, it needs more involvement of the parents to control this issue.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that students feel the greater participation of their parents in education affairs. Consequently, as the government cannot exactly control over children, it seems a perfect way to improve and develop the quality of education in our country.
- TPO 20 integrated writing 76
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- TPO 21 integrated writing 81
- TPO 47 integrated writing 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, so, for instance, in brief, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28869047619 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91011015982 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.045208867 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.85 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348375047764 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100157938862 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687015923206 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185848338099 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420766759811 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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