There always are a great deal of arguments about working hours. It has been an issue since some managers started to arise working hours and cut the working days. Many work strategists had opposite opinion of this. Personally, I am of opinion that working longer hours in a day not also is beneficial, but also it would be a great mistake for the both employee and employer. I believe this way because of reasons that I am going to explain in the following essay.
First of all, a long-hours-day for a firm is not a rational plan because it directly affects on the work efficiency. All staffs in a firm after a few times of work need to get a little rest, and put away tiredness. Suppose a company that employees should work more than the regular time, after a few days all of them are exhausted, so a lot of horrible mistakes is possible. These mistakes lead a firm to a fragile point, and soon or later a big failure definitely will happen. My own experience is a good example of this. About five years ago, I was joined to an electrical company. A few months later, the company decided to reduce weekly days and increase the working days hours. After three weeks, all of the staffs were suffering tiredness. One who was assigned to a critical position, which was controlling the electrical distributing system, inadvertently pushed a button. As a result, the whole system broke, and many blocks went into the dark. If the company had not changed the hours, the accident would not happen.
Second, increasing hours affect personal lives of employees because they are working longer than usual and have not enough time to spend with their families. Might this occur that they have more off days, but all the employees after a few intense working days need to be alone and rest. However, families need to have some leisure times together, so this breaking apart family members, and might have a terrible impact on their relationships. For example, my uncle was working in longer shifts, so he could not spend times with his wife. After a few discussions, his wife decided to get divorce.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that working for longer times in a few days in favor of having a more days off is not effective. I consider this because it affect on work efficiency, and because of having bad effect on the relationships that I have presented above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
There always are a great deal of arguments about working...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... working days hours. After three weeks, all of the staffs were suffering tiredness. One wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t effective. I consider this because it affect on work efficiency, and because of havi...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t effective. I consider this because it affect on work efficiency, and because of having ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66426858513 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59787837386 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7032240282 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5652173913 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252626736176 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725143116517 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629134291014 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172451128304 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243824679336 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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