In the past few years, a lot of comments have speared about the teamwork and grading system. There are some beliefs that all the members of a group, no matter which one is more efficient, should be evaluated as whole, while others refute. Personally, I am of the opinion that individual parts of a group most be graded by their own efforts, not by the project. I believe this way because of following reasons that I will explain in this essay.
First of all, there are always one or more persons in a group that they are not willing to do their best or they have not the ability, so it will effect on the project success. The group in the universities and school is forming by a teacher or a professor. As a result, the members are chosen randomly to shape a group, not by their skill. In this matter, there are some who are an obstacle for the group and waste others’ efforts. My experience demonstrates the reason. About four years ago, when I was assigned to a group project in the history class, there was a lazy student. In that semester, all of the group was working hard on the project and gathering data for the subject while he was doing something else. In the due date, finally, he did not prepare his part. Eventually, all of our effort because of one person was wasted and the project failed.
Second, when every parts of a group grade separately, they are tried harder to get better mark and everything goes in more convenient and efficient way. Suppose in a group besides of assignment that persons should have to do, they constantly are worry about whether others are doing well. Therefore, the tension among the group will be escalated and effect on the result. For example, in my project in history class that I have mentioned earlier, one of our daily job was arguing with the one student. For hours we tried to convince him to participate. If we had not this conflict, the result would be much better that we got.
In conclusion, because of the project success, and convenient and efficiency that I have explored above, I firmly believe that projects should be graded solely by every person effort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57853403141 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4552699188 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7872781175 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.45 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30709446617 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912356376068 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631770309191 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189831187581 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495412399591 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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