Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The world is changing faster and more numerous. because of such a dramatic switch, people tend to adapt and improve their lifestyle in many different ways. our careers are one of the most crucial things we have to consider in this modern time. personally, I believe that is working five days a week for fewer hours is much better than three days with long working time. I feel this way for two reasons which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, we need to get some time for our families. when we work for shorter hours each day, we will have the chance to go home earlier. therefore, we could enjoy the rest of the day with the family and sit with our children. family is an important part of our lives as well as our careers. By taking care of our family members day by day will benefit me and the whole by having a wonderful caring and lovely life. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. I finish my job around 3:30 pm every day, and I get home around 4 pm. I enjoy dinner time with my wife and my three daughters. They love to see me with them around the table every day and we admire to talk about many events of the day that happened to them, from learning new ideas and subjects from the school. Especially by doing their homework. On the other hand, if I work late I could not appreciate this and I will miss the opportunities to build solid connections between us.
Moreover, it is crucial that working fewer hours a day is healthier. many diseases nowadays are because of stressful and exhausting our body and mind at work. By reducing the working duration a day would benefit our long term health status, therefore, preventing many susceptible diseases. For instance, my father was working for a late time. he came home tired from his job in the dairy factory. one day my father felt pain in his chest and ask my older brother to take him to the hospital, the doctor told him that he has to take rest and long vacation to recover from his stress and health issues. if my father had worked for less time and reasonable hours a day, he would not face this health problem.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that working fewer hours for five days a week is superior to working three days and long hours. this is because I can spend and enjoy more time with my family, and because it protects us from different diseases and stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.425 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32416340587 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5387241017 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.88 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314848514671 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943762046679 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933680720204 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227471884336 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453920223578 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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