Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to suppo
Nowadays, mankind work in many different jobs with various characteristics and each individual has his or her own preference to choose between these occupations. there are two major categories of jobs in current era, the first one is a job in which you have to work for 5 days in a week with normal work hour, on the other hand, there are others that you need to work in 3 days in a week but in a longer period of time each day. According to people's personalities and their objective in life, they choose one of these. Personally, I prefer to work in a 3-day job rather than working for 5 days for several reasons. I will vindicate my point of view with 2 reasons in bellow, two of which are more important in my opinion.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue is the fact that in the current era people are struggling with various problems such as financial, traffic, and etc. So it is crucial to spend some time traveling, go far from city's atmosphere and relax on a beach or enjoy the sight of a jungle. In my point of view, we can do our job in 3 days and travel and be with our family for the rest of the week. My job is designing building, I am used to focusing on my job 3 days, all day and night, but after these days I go visiting beautiful landscapes in my country and do not think about my work stuff; it helps me to do my job even in better way.on the other hand, I have a cousin he works 5 day in a week and I have heard from his wife and children that they have not gone to any trip since last year and it is not good for family at all, it can cause serious problems in their relationship. In conclusion, as we are human we need other things besides money like go on a vacation and be happy in natural scenes, because of that we must spend part of our week on this matter.
Secondly, there are so many young people with a lot of energy who were eager to earn money as much as they can. The more you work, the much money you can gain. in my opinion, the youths can work in a company for 3 days and go on other part-time jobe for the rest of the week if they want to culminate themselves in their career. In a survey about this mather which published in the Times magazin, the researchers observed 100 young employees for 1 year half of them work 5 days in a week and the other half work in 3 days and work in another job for the rest of the week. At the end of the year, the second group has two advantages. first, they could earn more money in that specific year. second, they learn more from their older coworkers who have more experience in that particular job. As you can know by know the only reason that makes this considerable difference is that the second group work in 2 job which was happened because their first occupation was a 3-day job in a week.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments the 3-day jobs are better for several reasons and I mention only 2 more conscious of them in this essay. firstly, it is good for a person with family who has other responsibilities for his children and wife to take them to adventure journeys. second, it has significant benefits for young people who want to use his numerous energy in a good way to build a great future for himself and his future family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 52.1666666667 182% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2661.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 634.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19716088328 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41602693687 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427444794953 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.502543407 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1904761905 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417466293906 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129805402697 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113238202949 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274402830139 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885481925466 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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