Public transport system and internet access are basic amenities in the society which should be provided by the government. Both play similar but important roles, while the public transport helps the movement of people from one place to another, accessing the internet helps people communicate from both far and wide.
Firstly, the use of internet is global. It has helped people across nations keep in touch with themselves without having to use any form of transport system to do so. For example, banking transactions has been made easy by the use of internet. The idea of going to bank to withdraw, deposit or even speak to a customer care representative has reduced. On the other hand, public transportation has helped the masses tremendously. The more public transportation is made available, the more job opportunities are being created for the unemployed. For example, a driver will be needed to drive the public bus.
Secondly, the internet has helped reduced congestion on the road and pollution caused by some faulty vehicles ply the road. Accessing the internet has given us the idea that we can get things done from our comfort zone however some things cannot go to work through the internet which means the use of public transport is very necessary.
Finally, I disagree that the government should focus more on internet than public transportation.
In conclusion, although the internet has helped us immensely, job opportunities and the means of survival of people should not be overlooked. The more public transport are made available, the faster people get to their destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18461538462 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86795187006 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6236266218 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202347775005 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08176599593 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628924811176 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135243200248 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769576308175 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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