Nowadays, it has been a popular trend among modern citizens to move out of their hometowns.These changes of residence will inevitably incur several problems and much time is needed to get accustomed to a fresh environment.Thus, some people are ideologically against such a tendency, complaining that it will cause one to lose old friends.From my view, in spite of such detractors the merits of moving to a new place far exceed its defects.
First of all, more friends can be made in new surroundings.An old saying teaches us the truth that ''there are always more fish in the sea." Moving to a different place grants one a new neighborhood in which to reside and a new working environment in which to work.Either in daily life or at work, a new circle of friends will soon be created and maintained.Thus, it should be considered a blessed privilege to gain the opportunity to establish individual, the process of gaining more friends equates to that of making a bigger fortune.Indeed, there is no absolute stranger in the world.Bathing in the same atmosphere, mutual understanding might be initiated at any instead of losing friends, migration paves the way for gaining a new one.
In fact, old friends can still be kept in spite of longer distance.It is a smaller world we are now living in.Communications between people are faster and more convenient than ever.In addition to the traditional methods of making phone calls and sending letters or postcards by mail, new technology has brought forth many efficient channels that can help strengthen friendships across distance.For instance, numerous online instant communication tools have been developed.Among them, the most popular ones include MSN, QQ, Skype, Google Talk, and more.Faraway friends can be reached handily at any time.They can even see each other through video chatting.In addition, with more advanced transportation networks around the globe, old friends can get together in person conveniently.Just buying an airline ticket can make an old friend show up before one's eyes.Anyway, as long as their hearts are tightly bound, never can distance hinder the stable friendship between people who live apart.
Furthermore, other benefits can be gained from migrating to a new place.Undoubtedly, every city or country boasts its unique cultures and customs.Living in fresh surroundings can enrich a person's life experience and enlarge his knowledge scope.Meanwhile, better job opportunities may be available if the new place is more developed.In that case, the living standard and education quality might be enhanced as well.Besides, one's adaptability to changes is considerably improved owing to changes in the living environment.
Consequently, there is no need to worry about losing old friends after moving to a new place.Real and stable friendship should be strong enough to endure the test of space and time.Meanwhile, we ought not to neglect some potential advantages when people are immersed in a different living atmosphere.Thus, ample evidence is available to justify a choice to move away from a hometown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32515337423 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3406408665 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59100204499 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 20.1344086022 482% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.195519668 48.9658058833 456% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 520.8 100.406767564 519% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.8 20.6045352989 475% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.4 5.45110844103 576% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146077639702 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090105965142 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274361293725 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090105965142 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274361293725 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.6 11.7677419355 447% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.98 58.1214874552 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.10430107527 316% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 10.1575268817 405% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.77 8.01818996416 159% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.0537634409 406% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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