Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life is much easier today than 20 years ago
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Human creature is made from various factors that one of them is willing to improve to begin, establish, and finally accomplish an endeavor by which they are managed to have a prosperous life. Meanwhile, the natural characteristic of humans provokes them to seek welfare and comfortable life and accomplishment of formulas to achievement. Everyone has different steps of growth in different stages of life when individual personality setup and objectives of life breakdown hence, someone target simplicity for his life and someone target sophisticated life. Even though many people say that life before was more comfortable than now, but I choose today’s life more comfortable due to the below-outlined factors;
First and foremost is the existence of technology in today’s life. Technology plays a pivotal role in today’s life where different kinds of facilities have been provided by it. For the one thing, I may mention inside-house kinds of stuff such clothes wash machine, Air conditioner, water boiler which give much welfare to daily life. As a comparison, there were such facilities by days gone but sophisticated as they are for example, in the past the people mostly used manually clothes machine, fun and used wood or oil for boiling water which needs much spending time, workforce and direct involvement. Today, the technology provides automatic machines with less human involvement in which gives more welfare to people.
In second is the existence of communication and transportation facilities. Humans are a socialized creature who is always eager to be in touch, communicate, take part in common social life, and environment. Even though people who were lived in past had all these facilities but not in the sophisticated manner they are now. For example, in the past, the communication devices were cable telephone and telegraph, but today it’s much different such as smartphone, which provides verbal communication and gives video live. The next facility is transportation while in these days, the news is surrounding about trip to the galaxy, moon, and mars where the trip and traveling from one country to another country and even from one planet to another planet is the second nature of vehicles such as airplane, fast metro, rail metro and another.
In the conclusion, welfare and comfortable of life are all about existence of facilities from all aspects improved-technology facilities. As a matter of fact, technology is in progress and every day humans involve in innovation, establishment, and running of a new device, vehicle, and things for welfare and comfortableness of human. By and large, our parents and grandparent were faced in lack of facilities to have a welfare life and we will have faced a lack of facilities and welfare life in opinion of our children in future. These are all about human nature that looks for welfare and achieves better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'targets'.
Suggestion: targets
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'targets'.
Suggestion: targets
...get simplicity for his life and someone target sophisticated life. Even though many pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...welfare life in opinion of our children in future. These are all about human nature that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, while, as to, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21935483871 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04594941505 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1018329122 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.764705882 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3529411765 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114297365391 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398346229431 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372373826564 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073860104956 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393621659871 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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