Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life is much easier today than 20 years ago
Human creature is made from various factors which one of them is willingness to improvement in order to begun, establish and finally accomplish an endeavor by which they are managed to have prosperous life. Meanwhile, the natural characteristic of human provokes them to seek for welfare and comfortable life and accomplishment of formulas to achievement. Everyone has deferent steps of growth in deferent stages of life when individual personality setup and objectives of life breakdown hence, someone target simplicity for his life and someone target sophisticated life. Even though many people say that life before was more comfortable than now, but I choose today’s life more comfortable due to below outlined factors;
First and foremost is the existence of technology in today’s life. Technology plays pivotal role in today’s life where deferent kinds of facilities have been provided by it. For the one thing, I may mention inside-house stuffs such clothes wash machine, Air conditioner, water boiler which give much welfare to daily life. As a comparison, there were such facilities by days gone but sophisticated as they are for example, in the past the people mostly used manually clothes machine, fun and used wood or oil for boiling water which need much spending time, work force and directly involvement. Todays, the technology provides automatic machines with less human involvement in which gives more welfare to people.
In second is the existence of communication and transportation facilities. Human is a socialized creature who always eager to be in touch, communicate, take part in common social life, and environment. Even though people who were lived in past had all these facilities but not in the sophisticated manner they are now. For example, in past the communication devices were cable telephone and telegraph but, today it’s much deferent such as smart phone which not only provide verbal communication but also gives video live as well. The next facility is transportation while in these days, the news is surrounding about trip to galaxy, moon, and merikh where the trip and traveling from one country to another country and even from one planet to another planet is a second nature of transportation vehicles such as airplane, fast metro, rail metro and others.
In the conclusion, welfare and comfortable of life are all about existence facilities from all aspect improved-technology facilities. As matter of fact, technology is in progress and every day human involve in innovation, establishment, and running of new device, vehicle, and things for welfare and comfortableness of human. By and large, our parents and grandparent were faced in lack of facilities in order to have welfare life and we will have faced lack of facilities and welfare life in opinion of our children in future. These are all about human nature that looks for welfare and achieve better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'targets'.
Suggestion: targets
...ctives of life breakdown hence, someone target simplicity for his life and someone tar...
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Line 1, column 548, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'targets'.
Suggestion: targets
...get simplicity for his life and someone target sophisticated life. Even though many pe...
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Line 1, column 724, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mfortable due to below outlined factors; First and foremost is the existence of t...
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Line 4, column 518, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...welfare life in opinion of our children in future. These are all about human nature that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2445.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24678111588 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99982270286 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508583690987 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8655108392 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.823529412 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4117647059 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112031536119 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384129959473 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375846826043 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726335602206 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380629554832 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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