Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, the gap between how two generations live is incredibly wide, and our way of life, compared to that of our grandparents' is no exception to this phenomenon. In my opinion, these days people experience more convenient life than the past. I cling to this viewpoint for two main reasons and will shed light upon them in the following:
As the first and paramount reason, the advent of electronic devices has made our modern lives much easier than previous generation's. In the past decades, a great number of people did not have access to electronic machines. They had to do a major part of their activities with hands. These days, however, a wide range of applicable devices have been invented that provides a more comfortable life for people. For example, the emergence of dishwashers, vacuums, and cloth washers helps individuals, especially women, possess more expedient life. Our ancestors had to do mundane tasks took up time that they could have dedicated to other activities. Had had electronic devices, they could have enjoyed a more comfortable life.
Moreover, the widespread use of the Internet has a positive effect on today's life. Nowadays, a wide range of tasks can be done through the Internet without the need of the presence of a person. For example, Individuals are not required to drive to a medical clinic to make an appointment. They can go to a definite website, follow some instructions, and determine the date when they are willing to be visited by health providers. Several years ago, people had to drive their cars to a medical center to learn there was an available time to receive some services. They might have stuck to a traffic congestion resulted in stress and tension. This example demonstrates how the Internet helps us to live considerably easier than the past.
In conclusion, considering the foregoing points and examples, I firmly agree that individuals are leading significantly more expedient lifestyle. Not only the emergence of workable electronic apparatus but also the ubiquitous use of the Internet accommodate people with an easier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09537572254 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86808466626 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.617798507 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186367684599 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549129359748 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379717674384 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109698918168 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135631164342 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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