Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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It's a very wide subject to speak about it . Life is it comfortable and easy ? As many of us strugles in his life and think he had the most difficulties in the world than all other peoples but, many others on the other hands believe life today is much easier than before as his grandparents face it. I add my view to those who believe it's much easier today than our great grandfathers and for many reasons.
To begin with, today internet play spectacular role in our life today which makes it much easier than in the past. Nowadays we can get all the information we need by press a button. My experience with my grandfather is a good example for this, when i was teenager in eleventh grade and my father is a famous writer and he was at that time the editor for Al-jimhouria news paper( one of the most famous newspapers in my back home).I have been asked to produce a project about famous pottery and my grandfather was helping me to collect all the information i need as he wish to help me with this according to his field carrier but this takes a lot of time from him, he use to go to the neighbourhood library and collect books and read them to get the information that we need after two days i told my grandfather that we can get what we want in just we are sitting in our bed by internet. and within a few hours I collect same information than my grandfather did which he apply that much easier and faster way which help in making study more fun also .
What's more, all the services today in our life is much better than before. Hospital services, resaturants ,electricity, and so on. all these services makes life much easier and comfortable than before. in our grandfather time the health service is not that good so many people die from heart problem as an example without even know the reason for their death because no medical knowledge and even not much devices was discovered yet beside electricity which is the tramendous role in every part of our life and the list is so long.
In sum, although some believe the life before is comfortable, I personaly feel today life is much easier than in the past as internet help to make it easy besides many introducing of helpful services that change our life to the best ways
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3995157385 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48962227528 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496368038741 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.545102012 48.9658058833 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.769230769 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7692307692 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174932957228 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799626384051 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543258491315 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116547196841 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133220279111 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.