Lifestyles of humans have been changed in the last century dramatically. Modern technologies and innovation made our life easy and comfortable which was previiously unthinkable. But, all this means also made our life complicated and polluted our environment. Things are changed in the last century dramatically. Some people think that life today is easier and more comfortable than living in the early 1900s when our grandparents were born. I think the way we are leading life now is more easy and comfortable for several reasons.
First of all, the Industrial boom let our life easy and comfortable. The industrial revolution happened in the early 1900s. From then, there is no need for more work. Modern machinery made it easy to do work. For instance, previously we had to make our clothes by ourselves. But we have machines that can make clothes so easily and in a short time.
Secondly, technologies such as the internet made our life easy and comfortable. Internet-connected people from a distance. For instance, about 50 years ago we had to send letters through post-office. To deliver a simple letter it took weeks, months and we had to really wait for that long. It was also quite impossible to see somebody without visiting them. But, we can make a video call through the internet for almost free. All that one needs to video call to have an account. Different provider such as Skype, Emo, Viber, and all these similar internet media made it so much easy.
Finally, Modern transportation not only made our life easy and comfortable but also helped to travel a long distance. For instance, about a century ago, people had to travel horse and slow vehicles and it took a lot of time to travel. But, we have train that can speed up to 300km/hour. We have now planes and helicopters that can fly fast and land remote areas respectively. So, without these modern means, it is impossible to live nowadays.
In conclusion, modern transportations, the internet, and industrial means made our life easy and comfortable. So, I think all these modern made our life easy and comfortable.
- TOEFL T P O 16 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- TOEFL T P O 18 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy —computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation. 60
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In d 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 249, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'trained'.
Suggestion: trained
...k a lot of time to travel. But, we have train that can speed up to 300km/hour. We hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94350282486 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8960410095 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488700564972 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0082290419 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.8148148148 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1111111111 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090990895385 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283856261319 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533509228578 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574308121834 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586290388639 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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