Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I think life today is easier to live than a couple generations ago. Technology definitely has an important role on this progress that has made life more comfortable. Most of us do not realize this, but it is likely our grandparents would. Activities like a mobile phone call, paying for bills online, buying different kinds of food, clothes etc. are obvious examples. Also, nowadays long distance travel could be more convenient than a short trip seventy years ago when my grandparents were kids.
Undoubtedly, it is enjoyable anytime I have the opportunity to talk with my grandmother about how everything was a long time ago. I could ask a lot of questions and she always surprised me with her answers. Of course, I was paying attention to each part of her story. For example, in 1935 when she was eight, on Mondays she needed to travel to a capital city nearby to buy fabric for her mother to sew family clothes. Usually, on a good day, she could spend almost ten hours traveling in a terrible old bus. She makes me realize how today everything is better, because we have transportation facilities to travel around the world so quickly by comparison.
At this time, since the discovery of the internet everything became easier. We can communicate with anyone around the world, learning new things even at home, paying for bills, having fun by watching movies and listening to music and a bunch of other things. For example, I am a current english learner and I am using the internet to take classes with a native speaker. Which is comfortable and efficient because I do not need, even get away of home. Definitely, backing by my grandparents time, it could sounds like a delirium.
Also, we are getting use to live a practical an easier life. Maybe, could be a heavy task for much of us thinking how much the old generation work, to afford all of it for us. For instance, I was talking with an old man that lives close to my mother, his name is Mr. Matters, he was talking about his grandson, which do not want to go to school. Just because he hated buses and his mother did not be able to leave him at school by car anymore. Mr. Matters was so upset, he told me when he was a kid, he needed to walk almost seven kilometers with tick books, just to arrived at school. He got tired and it was hard getting focus on classes. Today everything is easier, in a couple minutes you move from one place to another.
In conclusion, I feel that we are currently making everything is possible to become life more practical and comfortable to live. It is impressive how we change a lot of things in a few times. Actually I am happy because my grandparents are still alive to live all enjoyable things we create.
- It is very important for students to learn as much as possible before their graduation from university. For this reason, many schools require students to attend all of their classes in person in order to achieve a passing score. Do you agree or disagree 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'sound'
Suggestion: sound
...cking by my grandparents time, it could sounds like a delirium. Also, we are gettin...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ike a delirium. Also, we are getting use to live a practical an easier life. May...
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Line 7, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e needed to walk almost seven kilometers with tick books, just to arrived at scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55010224949 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61897490041 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541922290389 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5183905522 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4074074074 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59259259259 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168954110444 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437063032489 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357549681823 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906017420791 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352004424682 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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