Philosophers believe that progress in science and technology is the vital part of development of society and humans as whole. Because of the continuous progress, we have advanced in various fields, if we compare the past we can realize how the world has been evloved. In that case, when we compare the childhood of our grandparents and ourselves, people question which is more comfortable and easier. In my opinion, living today is the easier one.
First, the transportation in the past is not quite east and also, the available choices are pretty low. It was tedious when people wanted to travel for jobs, education or vacation. But now, we got tons of options and if people had enough money that could travel to any place whenever they want. People can travel through trains, buses, airplanes or even in bikes and the number of sectors providing services in transport also got increased. It is easy to find government buses as well as private and people can use rental bikes and cars if they want. On the other side, the government is taking constant measures to make the cities and states connected by constructing bridges, subways and properly maintaining the highway roads.
Second, the communication has improved tremendously in the past ten years and it is possible to communicate with anyone in any part of the world. The parallel development in the field of electronics and internet made it possible for them to communicate through audio and video. Since smartphones are made more cheaper, it become super easy to contact anyone. Software industires are continuously contributing to the communication field by providing free applications like whatsapp, messenger, etc.
In conclusion, the above mentioned scenarios are examples of many scientific developments which makes our life easier today. It is evident that people who live in the current developed society got more facilities than the people who lived in the past. These are the reasons why I feel that living today is more comfortable than the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...o and video. Since smartphones are made more cheaper, it become super easy to contact anyone...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...e smartphones are made more cheaper, it become super easy to contact anyone. Software ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08408408408 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631413713 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9726969842 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1366668519 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482549685787 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673488473329 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872326225556 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741201325324 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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