Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When it comes to the issue that whether modern technology is creating single world culture, some people believe that technologies makes the world to become a small village. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that modern technology lead most people to accept that English is a dominate language. With the advent of the computer and the Internet over the past few decades, English language has been a prevalent language in the virtual world. Nowadays, the Internet is fully functional just for people who know English, because a great percentage of its information are written with English language. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Students know that they need to use the Internet in order to gain scientific information. Most of magazine, news paper, and scientific articles are written with English. Therefore, students have to learn English language, so that it is quite normal it will be increased more and more. So,
A further point we must consider is that fast meant of transportation makes the world as a huge market. In today's technology-rich environment, companies have access more vehicle transfer their commodities in any coroner of the world. Hence, without regarding that where people are living, they have access the same wares. For instance, Japanese had worn their traditional clothes such as kimono in the past, because they do not have plenty of selections as clothes. However, they now use of t-shirt or blue jeans, which are the same clothe for million of people around the world. In the way, expanding new technologies in transportation industry lead people to have access same products, which expand the single culture in the world.
Apart from points I made above, ease of communication allows people to share their idea with others quickly. Past people had lived in isolated cultures, because of the lack of connection with others nations, while technologies change the scenario. Nowadays, people have access plenty of social networks like Facebook, Google plus, twitter. Each of them assists people to be aware any news in every where. In addition, people are able to share their idea and customs with others, which makes people more flexible to accept differences. I think that there is not a netter example than valentine days, which is a Christian fast. However, young people in Muslim countries celebrate this romance day with exchange gifs, candy, and flowers with their love.
All above evidence supports that we are living in the world that most people have the same language, customs, and facilities. Last but not least, it is entirely possible some people do not like the idea of globalization, while sooner or later they found that the world moves toward a single culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273062730627 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.132841328413 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10147601476 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424354243542 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0424354243542 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132841328413 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.020295202952 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59774207513 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020295202952 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0922509225092 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00553505535055 0.0209618222197 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0166051660517 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2915.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 480.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07291666667 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385416666667 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254166666667 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185416666667 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102083333333 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59774207513 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.4656460694 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4615384615 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.08143321 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.115384615 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 43.8782051282 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.95762711864 1.45489161554 135% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244117104483 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751339243537 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055186628726 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458363448824 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151253270067 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827562786326 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057141323993 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304923091778 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037660861132 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171546976192 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473817807223 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.