Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern technology, movies and television have become an essential part of people’s life. However, more and more people today start to realize that some types of films and television are causing negative effects on the way children behave. I cannot agree more with this opinion, and I will explore my points in the following essay.
First, young people tend to trust and chase movie or television stars blindly. As we all know, children lack logical thinking. They are too naive to make correct judgments. Therefore, young people are easy to be affected by celebrities. Sometimes, they even do some crazy things to prove their love for some actors or actresses. For example, a teenage girl in China quit her school and stole a lot of money to meet a movie star. She left her home secretly. No one knew where she was for over three weeks. Her parents were desperate and had to call the police. Finally, polices found this girl, but she never got the chance to meet the actor.
Second, young children, especially teenagers, are likely to imitate violent actions in films and television. As a matter of fact, more and more violent content is appearing in movies and television. It is not hard to imagine that children who often watch this kind of movie will believe that violence is the only way to solve problems. For instance, news had reported that some middle school students were learning from a gangland film. They formed several illegal groups and even fought against other groups using tools like sticks and knives. This news is chilling because it tells us how easily our next generation is influenced by harmful content in movies and TV.
Third, young people are likely to suffer from eye diseases when they stare at the screen to watch movies or television for a long time. As we all know, eye problems like myopia are much more common today among small children. Children start to watch movies, cartoons, and television at an early age, even before their eyes are fully developed. Taking my nephew as an example, he loved all kinds of cartoons very much and began watching them even when he was a little boy, but his parents were so busy that they did not have enough time to guide my nephew’s actions. As a result, my nephew got myopia when he was only three years old.
To sum up, television and movies are causing enormous negative effects on young people. Everybody should work together to help create a healthy environment that emphasizes strong moral values. Only in this way, the well-round development of the next generation can be achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81208053691 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39202096247 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7949482662 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81481481481 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1988456738 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514048742917 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647089929547 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125306733288 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855017545876 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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