Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Some believe that all human beings are naturally under the influence. Although it may seem to exaggerate, at first sight, noticing the way that the world is ruled now, one may find this contention sensible. As the question states television and movies have many effects on young people, especially have more negative effects on behavior. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first interesting point to note is that most of the time, TV shows and movies are made for older people, and TV channels broadcast them under certain conditions. But some young people are very curious and go for programs outside their age group. Naturally, these movies and TV shows have a devastating effect on their behavior.
َAnother reason which should be taken into consideration is that movies created a different world that is far away from reality. Yong people could be misunderstood about the world surrounding them, and in these circumstances, older people should guide them to the right way. For example, when I was a child, I was obsessed whit fairytale stories and princes of Disneyland, but my mother explained to me the real world does not work like that. She told me I should be my hero and I never wait for the prince rides on a white robe.
The last but not the least reason to be mentioned is that movies and television normally should have more positive effects on the behavior of people, but the thing is how to choose the right program is important. If everyone watch the proper program, there was no harm to anyone. Another example that I could mention that is some parents install child locks on the TV network, and this can be helpful in some cases. But some other parents talk to their children and explain to them that some TV programs are not suitable for their age and give freedom of action to their informed children, which I agree with the latter.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that young people should make a decision for themselves, and freedom whit awareness brings more useful people to society.
In fact, there is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, may, so, for example, in fact, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79493670886 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56462568791 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526582278481 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8343970369 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.411764706 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205931561564 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640284486155 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834758038243 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10190548933 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446771954969 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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