Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of modernity worldwide, movies and TV beeing one of the essential part of human life. All people following news from TV and have recreation by watching movie. So, TV and movies influence all people by their contants. One of the materials that are still in the debate is whether movies and television have positivie effect on the way of people, particularly youth, or negetive? This may seem to be contoversial at first glance. While some people believe that TV and movies radically change the human life in possitive way, other hold colliding viewpoint. I firmly believe that youngsters should far away from the TV's and movies' effects. There are some adavantages to this view, and in this essay, I will elaborate on two of my most important reasons.
The first and most important reason is that advertises have adverse effect on the youth's life. They containt some stressfull materials. For instance, Holiwood films encourage people to luxury life or to be so strong. These information establish a competition on money among youth. The one who don't want to be wealthy in the future thinks that he/she defeat from others in this competiton so bear a lot of anxiety.
The second noteworthy point I want to mention is that news can occupy youngsters' mind. The recent syphological investigation show people scape from their anxioty to some information that not affect any aspects of their life. In the other mean, youngs overwhelm theirself in the fake news to scape from some painful facts. For example, when I was 18 and I felt in love of one girl, after she response negetively to me, I ovewhelm myself in social media.
In some, I firmly believe that youth should not attend to TV and movies in a way that easily infunence on them. Some reasons lead me to this view, chief amongst them is advertises can creat stress and anxiouty in them. Asides from this reason, fake news can involve all their mind. So I suggost to my peers get far away from TV
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
...t advertises have adverse effect on the youths life. They containt some stressfull mat...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...ople to luxury life or to be so strong. These information establish a competition on money among ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ition on money among youth. The one who dont want to be wealthy in the future thinks...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'defeats'.
Suggestion: defeats
...ealthy in the future thinks that he/she defeat from others in this competiton so bear ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s that news can occupy youngsters mind. The recent syphological investigation show ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74927113703 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53833581073 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.53032773 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118965235703 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382680648554 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470851342796 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705809557733 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448642657 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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