Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
In the modern era, social media play a prominent role in each individual's attitude. Although some Movies and television can be informative and educative, many TV programs can be a negative influence on young people' characteristic. In what follows, two elaborate reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
First of all, as a fundumental concept in psychological context, visual scene have a condiderabe effect on building young people's mind. Most movies and TV programs do not teach good values. For instance, some of them may include violence, drug taking, etc that can result in behavior disorder of the youth. Although some movies define a level age that the movie is sutivle to what, there is no strick cotrol over that. I had an experience related to this stroy. When I was a kid, one day I was a lone in our house. I was wathcing TV and changing channels frequently. I saw a film in fear genra. I really freaked out after whaching the movie and for on week I clould not sleep well.
The second noteworthy reason is not only can watching too much TV result in mental problems, but it can lead to several physical problems. Young people sometimes spend a lot of time in front of the TV instead of doing exercise and participating in physical activities. This kind of behavior will result in obisity and other problems related to obisity. when a person plays sports and goes climbing can enjoy the nature. Moreove, spending time with friend bring with ait a plenty of mental advantages that can reduce stress that yopung people expericence during their life. Conversely, a young person who eating junk food while watching movies and do not exercise will have a lot of physical problems as well as mental ones.
In conclusion, Although TV programs can be source of entertainment which is sometimes more affordable thatn other means of entertainment, I belive that it has a long-lastig adverse impact on the way the youth behave. This is because it contains programs that teach bad values such as smoking and violence. Also watching too much TV can bring with it several mental and physical problems.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ial media play a prominent role in each individuals attitude. Although some Movies and tele...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...frequently. I saw a film in fear genra. I really freaked out after whaching the m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... and other problems related to obisity. when a person plays sports and goes climbing...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ad values such as smoking and violence. Also watching too much TV can bring with it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86629526462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74748410863 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576601671309 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6144743706 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1904761905 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166680005554 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403335576272 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050065560813 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939787372676 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200387059685 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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