Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies are worth watching only when they teach
something about real life.
In recent years, the film industry and filmmaking have increased, and we
have started to ask what kind of movies are worth watching according to
many movies that exist. In today's hectic lifestyle, everything is more
accelerated than past; as a result, people need entertainment.
Personally, I disagree with the statement. I feel this way for two reasons,
.which I will explore in the following statement
First, modern life brings a lot of stress. People can watch movies to
distract their thoughts from the real-life and reduce stress. Thus,
watching a movie only for learning new things is boring; people need joy.
My own experience is during lockdown because of the covid I watched
''Friends'' and decreased my stress and set my mind free. Now I am
thinking about it, and I had a good time when I was watching a sitcom.
During that time, I mean the lockdown, my leisure activity was only
watching comedy movies and tv shows, and I relaxed after a long day. If
I took it seriously and started to watch only for learning things from real
?life, how could I survive
Second, all movies can teach new things, but it is not about real-life but
about imagination. Most of the famous and sold-out movies are science
fiction movies. They hit the box office every time they are released. The
main reason is the get people a chance to lead unbelievable life for
approximately two hours. For example, recently, I watched Dune, which
is about the imagined society set 20000 years in the future. While I was
watching the movie, I imagined what would happen if I was born in
?20000 later
In conclusion, I disagree entirely with the above statement. All of the
movies are worth watching for entertainment. People not only watch
movies to learn some things about the real-life, but they can also watch
.comedy to relax and science-fiction to allow us to think differently
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the real-life, but they can also watch .comedy to relax and science-fiction to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9040247678 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65254803544 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3648759103 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372955109315 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117165337982 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075531478587 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931200868311 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072926758525 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ement. I feel this way for two reasons, .which I will explore in the following st...
^^
Line 25, column 62, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...gree entirely with the above statement. All of the movies are worth watching for entertai...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the real-life, but they can also watch .comedy to relax and science-fiction to a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9040247678 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65254803544 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3648759103 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372955109315 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117165337982 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075531478587 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931200868311 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072926758525 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.