Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
In our day to day life, we have lots of options for everything. This is because there was a boom in technology, in the last few years and the young minds from each field are trying to invent a new technology or enhancing the older version to the new version. We should appreciate, enjoy, and use the technology which was invented. By using those it will be helpful for us in many ways like time-saving, equipping our knowledge further, learning a new hobby. I believe that the lifestyle which we are in now is far better than our grandparents.
To begin with, I would like to state that women are having a great opportunity in the employment sector. For example, it remains me of my mother who was a housewife. When I was young, my mother kept on saying about her childhood life. She was not allowed to go for work by her parents when she completed the studies because her parents decided to do a marriage of her. Those days there were no options to say no to parents in the culture where my mother was brought up. She agreed to her marriage and married my father. When days passed, my father allowed my mother to go for work. Later, my mother went to work as a beautician. She did not do any specific course for that job. By her interest, she learned the techniques for that job and she started her employment with the help of my father. I am happy that my father allowed me to study, to work based on my interest and I got married happily. After marriage also, my husband is supporting me for my carrier. Well, during my grandmother's childhood also there were only a few options for a woman to go for a job. That's why I believe the lifestyle which we are in now is fantastic, enjoyable and comfortable.
Next, in our today's lifestyle is it easy to frame a schedule for ourselves. For instance, if we want to learn a new skill, we can learn through online. But in our grandparents' and parents' lifestyle the online facilities were not there. If they want to learn a new skill they need to go in person and they need to spend that time only for that. Another example, I would like to mention is when we are doing a particular work at home like watching a movie at the same time we can cook by using our modern appliances like microwave oven, toasters, and blenders. We can do more than one work in a certain time frame. As a result, we are good at productivity and we are fulfilling our needs. Consequently, in the olden days, it's quite difficult to do more than one job at a time. Hence, I would say that our lifestyle is more comfortable, enjoyable and satisfied than our grandparents.
To conclude, I would say the lifestyle which we are in now is better at technology, time-saving, satisfaction and enjoyable. Thus, I believe it is excellent when compared to our grandparents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42495126706 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68864838597 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448343079922 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.426278624 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208704279204 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652109991795 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044181119352 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103595629765 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622929707748 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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