Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
The rise of modern technology in the last few years has a major effect on all sectors. In my opinion, I would say the use of the internet has a good impact on our lives. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
First of all, the latest technology gives us a way to explore new ideas and inventions made out of it. We can get to know the inner details of a particular technology through the internet. In fact, there are numerous ways to get information for a particular product by browsing the online services. For example, when I wanted to speak with my parents who live in another country I can easily connect them through the internet using video calling applications, and I can connect more than one family in a single video call. However, there might be some problems in the connection of the internet but it will get resolved in a few minutes. This gives more happiness and satisfaction for my family members and me. As a result, everyone in the family is happy and fulfilled by their requirements. For this reason, I believe that the usage of the internet has a positive effect on our day to day life.
Secondly, while using network-based technologies like work-related applications, and online course applications it helps us to learn and use technology whenever we want. My own experience demonstrates this reality. About 3 years ago, I had met with an accident so, I could not attend my office for the next 2 months. During those difficult times, the work-related applications helped me to connect with my colleagues to give updates regarding my current work and it was easy for everyone to understand the presentation given by me. This way the internet was so helpful for me to present my work. In addition, the internet helped me to engage myself through some online courses related to my job. In my free time, I was able to concentrate on that course to equip myself. This example clearly demonstrates the positive effect of the internet on my life in that critical situation.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the internet has a positive effect on life in modern society. This is because, we can easily connect to the persons whomever we want to talk, and because this helps to equip our knowledge further and easy to do work from home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65356265356 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76892076938 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506142506143 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7889766809 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157957079308 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543669098569 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600375542051 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114132653765 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024783435958 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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