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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

No books should ever be banned

Reading books expands people's knowledge and leads to the thriving of the communities. While some people believe that particular books with different contents showed be banned. I differ to beg, In my opinion, all types of books should be allowed and available for people to read. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, Not all people have the same taste when it comes to choosing books. In other words, the diversity of books is essential to please all different tastes of people. Therefore no books should be banned. I remember two years ago in my country, some books with advert political opinions were forbidden. And that led to general population resentment. People felt a sense of controlling their freedom. Thus, for this specific reason, many organizations had protested against this oppression. As a result, a tremendous number of people were injured in these protests. If people had not been banned from reading some books, Many injuries would not have been happened.

Secondly, I believe this is not a duty of the government. They should focus more on achieving a perfect environment for people. Also, I think that people are aware enough to decide which books to read and which not to do. Governments and high authorities should trust their citizens more. My experience is a compelling example of this. Recently, I moved to the united states. The rules here are Utterly fair, and people have the freedom to read whatever they want. Yet, they choose what they want to read carefully, and most of the population is trustworthy. In the end, that led to the Prosperity of the country because of the number of highly educated individuals.

To sum up, While some people propose that some books should be banned. I firmly believe that all books should be allowed and people should have the right to decide what to read. Government should trust its people because that will benefit it back.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ads to the thriving of the communities. While some people believe that particular boo...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... please all different tastes of people. Therefore no books should be banned. I remember t...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, i think, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91265060241 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56566222627 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0018665837 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.24 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.28 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192508521185 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561826704094 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070578671653 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133263576069 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456055647214 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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