Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
It is generally agreed that helping other people, even people that we do not know, is a pivotal anthem among all nations. Due to its important features, there is a long-standing discussion among people about whether they help strangers in this modern world or compare to the past or not. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that they help more people even if they do not know them, whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. Although it is a little hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I believe that people do not assist strangers now more than in the past. They are super busy with work and daily problems. Also, people have limited resources of money and they do not have the motivation to help strangers.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that approve that people are not willing to help others is that they are pretty busy these days. To illustrate this one need to refer to their work and the time they spend going to work. Simply stated, they are overwhelmed with this hectic life. One should not forget that people just had one work in the past, however, they have to handle two or three now. Take an example, my friend, Davis, who has three jobs in order to afford his life with four kids. It is crystal clear that he does not have time to even think about helping other people.
Let us continuous by considering the fact that limited resources of money prevent people to think about helping others. Needless to say that they prefer to spend money on children's upbringing which is a vital factor in this modern life with its galloping progress. In addition, they need to rest in order to recover themselves to continue their job with high performance. As a result, they go on vacation and consume money on these kinds of entertainment to recover their body and mind. If they plan to help other people they prefer to help their relatives instead of people without having any information about them.
Last but not least, motivation can be above all factors. Needless to say that people need the motivation to do any work. having this gain from society, someone should teach them helping people is a precious act they can do. However, unfortunately, media have a profound impact on them which make problems in this regard. People normally spend their free time following media such as social networks and TV and they do not present any comprehensive and constructive program to encourage people to help others. I, myself, believe that people usually learn many good points from media, but these days they have only negative effects on people.
In summary, with all these taken into account, I support the idea that people are not willing to help strangers now. They do not have financial resources, have enough time, and also do not have motivation.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ainment to recover their body and mind. If they plan to help other people they pre...
^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...ple need the motivation to do any work. having this gain from society, someone should ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7659137577 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3978175112 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492813141684 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.711813953 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.84 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.48 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374549845692 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120949006191 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745409038048 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234700342244 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649100444704 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ainment to recover their body and mind. If they plan to help other people they pre...
^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...ple need the motivation to do any work. having this gain from society, someone should ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7659137577 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3978175112 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492813141684 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.711813953 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.84 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.48 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374549845692 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120949006191 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745409038048 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234700342244 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649100444704 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.