Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that the opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, younger people are more vulnerable to peer pressures, and standing on the same side of celebrities allows them to look cool in their groups. For example, a lot of students nowadays spend a large amount of money on clothes from trendy brands only because celebrities are promoting them, and owning merchandise of such brands attracts their friends' attention and may even make them a star in school. On the other hand, older people do not desire others' attention. What they only need is comfortable clothes that make their lives easier.
Secondly, younger people have fewer personal experiences to deal with terrible situations, and listening to the opinions of celebrities provide them the solutions. For example, when a controversial issue occurred in Taiwan in 2019, many celebrities expressed their thoughts about the issue as soon as possible. At that moment, a lot of young people hold the same opinions as the celebrities' when others asked for their thoughts, and most of them said that they can't think about it on their own due to the lack of experiences.
Lastly, younger people are more exposed to social media where celebrities express themselves, so it is easier for the younger generation to be influenced. For example, I am glued to instagram where my idols post their opinions everyday, so I would definitely notice them once they have any new articles. However, older people are less connected to social media, so generally speaking, the opinions of celebrities are not important for them at all because they do not even know what the celebrities just said.
Therefore, I definitely agree that the opinions of celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people for the reasons mentioned above. Younger people care more about their friends' thoughts, they have less experience thinking about things by themselves, and they are more exposed to social media nowadays.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oughts, and most of them said that they cant think about it on their own due to the ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...gram where my idols post their opinions everyday, so I would definitely notice them once...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 346.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11271676301 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71035556054 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482658959538 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3929772825 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.357142857 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336090839063 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147714642341 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130695133708 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252095337181 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129933101495 0.0443174109184 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oughts, and most of them said that they cant think about it on their own due to the ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...gram where my idols post their opinions everyday, so I would definitely notice them once...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 346.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11271676301 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71035556054 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482658959538 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3929772825 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.357142857 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336090839063 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147714642341 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130695133708 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252095337181 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129933101495 0.0443174109184 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.