Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although anyone might get impressed by her or his celebrity attitude, I believe that young generation are much more influenced rather than old folks. This can happen due to several reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
To begine with, celebrities are mostly like idols to young people, especially teenagers. They appreciate them so much that they might even imitate their life style. For instance it's about two years that majority of my country's teenagers become BTS fan, a korean boy band; and during these years they became so obssesed with this band that they started learning korean while there was not such enthusiasm to korean language before this; with this much eager twoard a celebrity it is no longer odd that they care so much about their idol opinion in different matters.
secondly, nowadays most of the young people have social media accounts. Now and then, some specific things become trend and prevail rampantly among the users. Most of the times these trends get started by a celebrity; also these trends can be a standpoint twoard a specific matter. To be more specific, a celebrity might state his or her opinion about something and her fans share this so fast that it become an icon among a social media users not only the fans. It actually is happening right now about gay community and their rights. Most of the celebrity supported homo people and now it is becoming a thought trend among young people.
Furthermore, young people seek someone to look up and follow more vigorously in comparison with the old ones. Old men have lived enough to gain myriad experiences for the rest of their life, therefpre they don't idolize other people and won't look up for a role model. They can easily overcome the arduouse situation relied on their own knowledge.
In summary, younge folks are more prospenese for looking up to an idol and getting inspired by them to overcome their hardships of lives, social media played a big role in this idolization of celebrities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85923753666 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41500898225 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3178123022 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164831926441 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579412856333 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363626631744 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085980321028 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351596988901 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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