Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Playing an indispensable role in both individual and professional lives of all people, paying attention to celebrities has been of a first-rate importance for all individuals. However, there are some factors that play roles to indicate their importance in our lives. A question that might arise, with respect to this fact, is whether older people pay attention to celebrities as the younger people do. Personally, I am of the conviction that celebrities are more important to younger people for two reasons that I will provide them in detail below. Not only, have older people busier lives, but also the younger individuals want to follow celebrities style of life more to be as successful as they are.
To commence with, as we grow up, we have more things to do and we have a more complicated life that we had in the past. Strictly speaking, when we were younger, we did not concern about our future and the real meanings of life were not that much clear to us.
All we had to do was studying and our parents controlled our finances. But as we get mature, we had to accept the fact that life is not as simpler as we think and the responsibilities of life become more crystal clear. For that being so, we do not have that much time to follow other celebrities news and also we do not pay that much attention to them. For example, there was a festival in Italy, that my favorite actor, Tom Cruise, had a programme there. When I was a child that was really important to me to go there and see him in person. Over the course of time, I was less interested in his life as the difficulties I faced through my personal life get stronger.
Another justification lending credence to the argument is that the younger people have some interests to follow the celebrities' lifestyle. They attract to famous people and they go through their lives to find the most personal information that they can get from their living styles. Broadly Speaking, when we are young, we want to find an idol that they are so successful and they also seem heroic to us. We have this idea that if we follow their path of life, we can overcome our difficulties in our life like them and be an idol to the other young individuals. However, most of us do not think that the preservation of their lives is not everything that happens in their lives. To illustrate, a research done by German researchers reveals that celebrities are more than other people in the path of being depressed because they always have to show their good side of life to other people to be famous.
Drawing upon the reasons, I am convinced that celebrities are more important to younger people than older people. One reason was that older people do not have much time to pay attention to celebrities' lives and the other one was that people who are in the earlier stage of their lives find it more interesting to follow someone else lifestyle to be successful as they are. I strongly recommend that people should always consider both sides of celebrities lifestyle not just the preservation of their lives. Only in this way, individuals would flourish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...not have that much time to follow other celebrities news and also we do not pay that much a...
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Line 6, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...eople have some interests to follow the celebrities lifestyle. They attract to famous peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, broadly speaking, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6583434847 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412727272727 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0954026726 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.956521739 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9130434783 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183363367969 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066195068801 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060788093148 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123030224172 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063714439687 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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