Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
Nowadays, our world is changing in a galloping way that no one can claim that he or she is able to anticipate everything accurately. Indeed, in order to keep pace with world, people should follow news. Thank to the new technologies, all of us can easily access to various news sources. However, the situation has caused a heated controversy among people about the necessity of following different news sources. In this regard, people have divided into two groups, some of them claim that it is enough to get information from a few sources, while others believe otherwise--that is--for being well-informed, one should check several new sources. I, for one, subscribe to the latter group for quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, news agencies are not always reliable, and sometimes do not broadcast news in an appropriate fashion. In many countries, political parties have their own media and news chanals in which news is broadcasted. It is incontrovertibely axiomatic that these sources usually have biassness toward events and try to exploit politically. All of us have had seen these ''objective'' sources in which similar events and news are transmitted in different ways, and this discrepency has to do with their political diversion. However, if one try to read a news from different sources, he or she can be sure about the authenticity of the news. In addition, if these sources feel that people have become aware of their biassness, they take action to improve and broadcast news professionally.
In addition, because news is usually full of details. it is rational to get information from various sources. Otherwise, some details probably will be lost. To elaborate, let's consider an important festival in which quite a few lectures were hold, and many news agencies have transmitted about it. However, every agencies have reports about it based on it's scope, for example some sources have concentrated on poltical aspects and overlook the artistic ones and does not include sufficient details about artistic events in the festival. Hence, it seems that spending time to search different source for a news is not wasting time. Rather, it brings us sufficient and reliable details about the news. Additinally, some sources are able to give information conclusivelly, while otherwise do not access to such information. Accoridingly, several sources should be used to get information.
Eventually, reading news from many sources namely the Internet, TV, newspaper, and social networks, to name but a few result in becoming familiar with different view stands. Many news sources have various interpertation and meeting with experts along with the original news. These informative programs are highly useful and help people broaden their mind. Thus by following news through various channels, people can be more knowledgeable.
All in all, I am penchant for getting information and news from several sources on the grounds that by doing so, we can accsess to reliable and full-detailed news and also know different view points, so let's not take these invaluable news sources for granted and use them in an efficient manner to be well-informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23404255319 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93094899466 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500967117988 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3203690808 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8846153846 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301455817921 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938063562086 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684345103384 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192488604387 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240107476701 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.