Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
The Internet can be considered as one of the greatest inventions of mankind. Though it has a few demerits, it’s widespread usage has a profound positive impact on the world. I feel this way for quite a few reasons, but I will mention a few of them in the following essay.
To commence with, the widespread usage of the internet has changed the way we communicate. Before the advent of the internet, people used to communicate over the telephone. Though telephones help in long distance communication, it has limitations when we compare it with the internet in a way that it allows only for voice communication. The telephones do not allow for video communication. The internet made it possible for two people living at the opposite ends of the world feel as if they are living right opposite to each other. The Internet has enabled people to have not just video calling but various forms of it as well like group video calling, sharing pictures etc.
Secondly, the internet has improved the ways in which we perform various tasks that have improved our productivity in leaps and bounds. One important aspect to bring up in this context is the way it has transformed banking. Back in my adolescence when my father had to send me money, he would go to a bank which is 20 km from home, fill in a form, wait in a queue at least for half an hour and only then he would be able to deposit money in my account. And guess what, he had to leave his farm work for at least half of the day to make this transaction. But if we look at the present scenario, we can do bank transactions at the click of a button right from where we are and this couldn’t have been possible without the internet.
Finally, the most important change that the internet has brought is the access to quality education all over the world. If we look around what is available on the internet for learning something, there are multitudes of sources to learn from. The subject could be as old as the universe or cutting edge subjects like quantum computing, we have access to the best content that one can ask for. No matter what grade a student is studying, if the student is interested in something that is not in his/her books, the student can simply go on to the internet and be amazed at what he/she can discover.
All in all, I personally feel that the internet is making human civilization advance in unprecedented ways. This is evident in the way it had transformed communication, increased our productivity by manifold and provides access to world’s best learning resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re living right opposite to each other. The Internet has enabled people to have not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, at least, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62280701754 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73654336539 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495614035088 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5468425951 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133163978295 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483008018117 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424945992177 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785390418754 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040782167646 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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