Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Nowadays, people spend about half of their time online, forgetting to do their chores and starting to procrastinate for the above reason. However, I believe that the Internet is more of a human assistant, who helps developing the humanity for the better. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, now unlike going to the office adults are able to stay at home by having a distant access to files, mails and documents. The Internet also creates all conditions for teamwork over the network, giving a person the opportunity to eat , take a break in a relaxed atmosphere and even keep an eye on the kids. For instance, me and my family were satisfied with an online work during the pandemiс as it gave us a chance to save time without spending hours on a road. We were also surprised at how much easier our lives have become, realizing the possibilities of the Internet to be a simple connector between us and our workplaces. Now I continue to study at home, with an opportunity to do exercises during recess and listen to a lecture, while cooking. Thus, the spread of distance busyness through the Internet has significant advantages for a person, affecting all areas of his life.
Furthermore, the Internet is a huge storage of information, which is accessible to any modern person, starting from a child, ending with an elderly. This is the easiest way to learn world news, whether from the International channels or directly from other people. Moreover, the network stores important files for people, it is a also a platform for art and studying. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. For the past few years I post poems online, download my school books and even store passport data on some cloud sites. All these opportunities saves money and space in the house, keeping me calm for my things, which can no longer be lost. Accordingly, people keep notes, photos and audio, having access to them on any other device, which makes life clearly less confusing and difficult.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that our generation is moving towards perfection using resources and technologies such as the Internet. Thanks to it, we gain knowledge, work, develop and improve ourselves, making the world the better space to live.
- Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us but others think that studying the past can help us better understand the present Do you agree or disagree 76
- More educators these days are using technology in the classroom In fact many teachers now record their lectures upload them on a website and ask students to watch them before their lesson During class students report on the lectures and discuss them toget 76
- The author of the article suggests that this type of dinosaur was the inactive hunter and preferred to eat dead animals and eggs However the lecture argued that R robustus was an active hunter and could be hunted on other dinosaurs 61
- The internet means that people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live Do you agree or disagree 90
- The maps show the Grange park as it is today and as it was a century earlier 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...is more of a human assistant, who helps developing the humanity for the better. I feel thi...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'distant access'.
Suggestion: distant access
...ults are able to stay at home by having a distant access to files, mails and documents. The Inte...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., giving a person the opportunity to eat , take a break in a relaxed atmosphere an...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...son, starting from a child, ending with an elderly. This is the easiest way to learn world...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tores important files for people, it is a also a platform for art and studying. M...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8524173028 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74597825146 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5720337238 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104688180589 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031948153935 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227181005872 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645195854534 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162797039129 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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