Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
The development of technology facilitated the presence of the internet, which has certain pros and cons. Many people including experts say that there is the magnitude of downsides of this networking system. However, I believe that the general influence of this advancement has beneficial effect on individuals’ life. I have three rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people can communicate with their others from distant area, which signifies that they will not be overwrought due to missing others. Needless to say, it is hard for people to be together with their beloved ones. Therefore, they might miss them when they are far from these people. However, there are numerous applications and programs such as “Facebook” that can help us to have chat with our close friends and family members. Consequently, we can even see faces of our family members, and get in touch with them irrespective of the distance between us, which is truly appreciable opportunity to escape from any emotional disorder.
Secondly, we have easy access to information on the internet, so we can be well-informed by reading this data. Few years ago, having knowledge was only possible for ones who can afford printed materials from shops or libraries. By contrast, not only students and experts, but everyone can investigate information on the internet. Therefore, we will have fine knowledge about divergent things of our world.
Finally, the internet offered comfortable way to spend our leisure, which means that individuals do not have to waste their money. In modern society, we can watch a movie, hearken to music, and play video games thanks to various sites including “YouTube” and “Netflix” when we have free time without even consuming cash. Hence, we do not have to go out and pay for things to enjoy matters because of a boredom. For example, I watch movies at my home instead of going to cinema, and squandering money. As a result, I can save my money.
In summation, I am of the opinion that the internet has positive impact on people’s life. This is because people can chitchat with their companions even from distant location, they can find information from the internet readily, and they are able to expend their leisure time without wasting money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1171875 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82432770508 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7788733668 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08494826677 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317168798898 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374367755792 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053486784083 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238507280283 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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