Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In every child’s life parents are plays vary important role from birth to his mature level. In my opinion parents are the best teachers in the world. The supporting reasons and examples for my opinion are explained in the following essay.
Firstly, in every adult life many teachers are come and goes but the parents are remain stable for teach their child in various situation and encourage to face problems that comes in his life. They are shear their life experiences and to motivate their child to solve problems and move forward. Parents are always standing behind their child in any situation. In my case when I was an fourteen years old I am suffering from Appendix and doctor tells my parent it is necessary to do operation on it very quickly. I am not ready for operation my parents are telling me various experiences from their life and make me ready for the operation. Parents are always thinking positive and beneficial for their child.
Second, every parent love their child and they are always with their child from their birth. In first six year of child life only parents are take decision about what is good and what is bad for their child. They are teach many think to their child like how to walk, how to speak, how to wear cloths and various think that is important in his feature life. When their child got mature they can teach them how to speak older person, respect for other person. They are also passing forward their culture with their child.
Thirdly, the parents are also responsible for one of respected and well settled citizen of their country. After six year of their child parents are send them to school, after school they send them to college and after for their higher study and make them responsible citizen of country.
In conclusion, the parents are the best teacher in every child’s life; because parents are teach many think to their child, which are useful and important in his feature. They are also trying make his child respected and responsible citizen of their country. They are always support their child in every condition or situation. Also they motivate their child to face problems and solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hild in various situation and encourage to face problems that comes in his life. They a...
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...in any situation. In my case when I was an fourteen years old I am suffering from ...
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...itive and beneficial for their child. Second, every parent love their child an...
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...d what is bad for their child. They are teach many think to their child like how to w...
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...ward their culture with their child. Thirdly, the parents are also responsibl...
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...ter six year of their child parents are send them to school, after school they send ...
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...them responsible citizen of country. In conclusion, the parents are the best ...
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...ir child to face problems and solve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78666666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25266262207 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418666666667 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2684807086 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873976968231 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436684954312 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471957227716 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719486400917 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514711732242 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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