Some people believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. other feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live.
Earth And human are having close relation to each other, human try to make earth better for live and do what he want. He cut’s jungle’s and set up big cities having availability of various services. They are developed various technology which by-product is harmful for earth and for them. I believe that the human’s activities are more dangerous and harmful for the earth; in the following essay some reasons are explain why the human activity is harmful for earth?
Firstly, in current age “Global warming” is the biggest issue for the world, the temperature of earth is increase year by year. The main reason of global warming is cutting of jungles, hence the sun radiation is directly coming on earth and earth absorbs that radiation. The cutting of trees is also cause of dryness on earth. Human develops technology like vehicles, we all knows that all vehicles are run on diesel or on petrol the by-product of that vehicle is carbon dioxide. The trees are take carbon dioxide of their live and produce food and release oxygen which is needed for human to live. The cutting of trees is also cause of increasing the percentage of carbon dioxide in the environment.
Second, industrial development is one of the major causes of air pollution; industries produce harmful gases which are harmed for human health and these gases are also cause of global warming. There is ozone layer is present in stratosphere around 15 to 35Km from earth surface. The main function of this layer is to filter the sun radiation which coming from sun towards the earth. This layer is damaged due to this air pollution and this pollutant gases are create hole in the ozone layer and from that hole the sun radiation are directly comes on earth. The effect of that radiation is global warming and it directly effect on human health. This radiation is major cause of skin cancer.
Thirdly, human destroys the natural beauty of nature and create artificial beauty less effective and less profitable for human. Human also removes the solid material which is in the earth stomach and this is also cause of air pollution and sound pollution.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that human activity is harmful for earth, because it increase the global warming, it also harmful for human health. The human activity is also reason of loss of natural beauty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92731829574 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51369575328 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441102756892 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3713698058 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351046216199 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117465682714 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112561261254 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227528543053 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108298596854 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.