Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should set strict rules to their children if they want them to succeed in the future.
People cannot become successful without making great efforts. There is no doubt that it is a long-term process. Thus, parents could set some strict rules to help their kids form a good habit and promote their success in the future.
First, kids should obey strict rules which can help them form a good life habit, and this will lead them to make success in the future. Most parents require their children to go to sleep before ten o’clock and get up at seven o’clock. According to a research, children have to sleep at least nine hours a day between six years old and fifteen years old so that they can be energetic attending classes and learn better. Besides, enough sleep enables children to be more healthy. People can do nothing without a healthy body. In this way, children have more chances to succeed when they grow up.
Second, it is very important for kids to follow their stable study schedule so they can be successful later on. On the one hand, children are more hardworking and have better grades to some extent. As we all know, people who received higher education has more possibilities to be successful than the people who only finished their high school. On the other hand, kids will develop a strong sense of time if they are capable of finishing their homework on time. Time is a significant factor of success. For example, people may lose the opportunity to get success if he or she oversleep in one morning and forget to attend an important interview. In conclusion, having a good study habit will be more possible for kids to be successful.
Last but not the least, a good manner can also contribute to the kids’ success afterwards. Good parents always set strict table manners so that they could be welcomed by some successful people. Therefore, it will be easier for them to achieve success in the future.
Clearly, as mentioned above, these rigorous rules such as a good life habit, a study habit and table manners are much likely to make children success when they are adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost parents require their children to go to sleep before ten o'clock and get...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...e energetic attending classes and learn better. Besides, enough sleep enables children...
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Line 9, column 576, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'oversleeps'.
Suggestion: oversleeps
...opportunity to get success if he or she oversleep in one morning and forget to attend an ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78977272727 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45916416249 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2801129591 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203047622802 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624531852438 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621922369616 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123718102558 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506287655652 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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