Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No doubt that the world has changed recently, due to myriad advancement in all the life aspects. And one of these changes is the role of the parents in their children`s education. Some people think that their roles have not changed. On the other hand, some say that they become more involved in their children's education. From my point of view I agree with the latter second school, and I believe that the changes are mandatory and essential part in this modern life. However, my view will be analyzed in this essay for further explanation.
To begin with, there is no exaggeration to say that nowadays, due to the evolution in all the world fields, a lot of roles have changed. And one of these changes is the parents roles toward their children`s education. On the one hand, let us think about what the technology brings to us and its influence on the students, and there is a scientific statistic indicates that the pupils studying hours decreased a lot compared to the past, so it is normal that the parents roles changes from the past. However, the vivid example is my youngest brother because of the presence of the social media such as Facebook, Snap chat and other Websites, he takes a special care and different way of dealing from my parents and actually it is differed from me or my oldest brother.
On the other hand, the family members number in the past was huge. The families were extended and there was no time for the parents to give their children enough time to educate them like now. For instance, my both grandparents families consist of fifteen daughters and sons. So the first goal for the parents is looking to provide for them. In contrast, all the families today's are nuclear families that is mean fewer members not like the previous one. For example, my family consists of four members, so the amount of attention is bigger due to the availability of enough time .
All in all, I think my opinion is strong and solid enough to clarify all the previous reasons beyond my agreement, and I believe the changes were mandatory, we cannot stand in one spot while the world is in fast race.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66755319149 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52677825477 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7998611772 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.235294118 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181786163299 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636516363366 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628755470594 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102493900708 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461346964845 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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