Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No one can deny that parents plays a major role in their child`s life. Although we are living in a very competitive world where everything changes very fast, I believe that parents are paying more attention in their children education comparing with parents in the past. In the following essay I will explore my point of view.

To begin with, since the number of child has reduce in modern families, parents are having more time to dedicate to raising a child. In the past, ever member in a family had to work for hours in factories or farms and children were seen as a labour force. Nowadays, with the advance of technology children are not considering as workforces so they might dedicate their hours to study. For instance, my grandfather used to tell me about his childhood. He always mentioned that his dream was to be a teacher but he had to start to work in a cotton plantation since he was 6 years once he needed to help to maintain his family. If he had had better opportunities he could had realized his dream.

Secondly, parents are more concerned about their kids future. Nowadays we are living in a very aggressive world where everybody are looking for better opportunities to success, thereby in order to survive in such environment parents are investing too much money in their children`s education. An example of mine might illustrate that. Since I was a child my dad pays me language courses and also encourages me to practice extra-curricular courses after school because in his opinion, doing these things I might develop important skills that will allows me to be a good professional. With that in mind, they try to provide better opportunities to their kids.

To sum it up, as aforementioned, caring about children`s knowledge is essential not only because it support them to live their dreams but having a good education allow them to be prosperous in their adulthood.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...gin with, since the number of child has reduce in modern families, parents are having ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... needed to help to maintain his family. If he had had better opportunities he coul...
^^
Line 5, column 670, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e had had better opportunities he could had realized his dream. Secondly, pare...
^^^
Line 13, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...wledge is essential not only because it support them to live their dreams but having a ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in fact, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88379204893 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90015012796 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.730261813 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225353534636 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772689219372 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623873813683 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147996069041 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620462437769 0.0645574589148 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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