Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
At every turn of each individual life, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant effects of travel's experience in our life. Some people are of the opinion that there are excellent benefits of traveling to foreign countries. On the other extreme of the rope, others believe that traveling in their own country have numerous advantages. Although both sides take their own positions, personally speaking, I firmly agree that the first group carries more weight. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reasons to justify my points of view.
As the first and paramount reason, travel to foreign country exposure people to innovative ideias and help them learn helpful skills for their goals. In other world, when people know different cultures or habits they can develop valuable experiences and rational approaches. As a result, they can expand their horizons and achieve their personal objectives. Take my own experience as a example. Two years ago, I traveled to Japan. When I was there, I could learn about the japan's culture. After three months, I could understand how are their notion of society. In this sense, I got valuable concepts of lifestyle and virtues, which I will take for my entire life. Therefore, If I had not travel to foreign country, nor I could have valuable experience neither could I learn about Japan's habits.
The second reason coming to my substantiate my viewpoint is that, when we discover new countries we become more adventurous. To be more specific, the contact with different cultures increase people self-confidence. Hence, they come out from their shells and start to try distinct acts and things. For instance, an experimental research conducted by some psychology scientists shows that people who are more adventurous have less stress and worries. Also, the research mentions that these people have a good mental health. Consequently, these people will have less psychological disease, such as depression.
In conclusion, take the above reasons into account, I strongly believe that people who travel to many countries not only open up a whole gamut of great individual experience, but it also helps to maintain a health life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15211267606 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76471375272 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594366197183 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2106474144 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0952380952 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291540650414 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768248640802 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590814354712 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166413084186 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541245725253 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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