Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling has been a source of interest for us, and since the dawn of humanity, humans going to different places instead of staying in one place, so the tendency to the traveling is a need and satisfy it is a must. The question which arises here is benefit from traveling in our country is more or from foreign countries? Some people opt for the former one; however, others might deem that the latter might carries more weight. My sentiments exactly with both attitudes toward traveling, which I will explore my reasons in the following essay.
First of all, the world is a book and those who do not travel read only a page. Traveling can teach you more than any university course. To concurs with the first attitude, traveling in your country teaches you about your homeland. But in my opinion, traveling abroad have more benefits than in your country. When you travel to other countries, you see more places, allows you to try amazing food and cuisine and learn about the cultures of the country you visit, such as their language, thinking, habits, traditions, and history, so you can find differences between people from all over the world. When you are returning from a journey, you will see your country with new eyes. You can notice what makes your culture and heritage in your country unique. As you more travel, you have more stories you can tell your children and grandchildren. Therefore, traveling makes your attitude broader.
The second reason coming to my mind to substantiate and indicate my standpoint concerning this issue is that it is essential to be noted that worldview goes hand in hand with traveling abroad. In the past, the journey to other countries not comfortable and almost inaccessible, at least for ordinary people. But today, life is very different from the past. We can travel as easy as pie with buying a ticket online from our home. Other aspects of the travel impact on our health, intelligence, social network. With society continues to develop, peace of mind has been called into question, and stress was being become the most crucial part of our life. Besides, inevitably our activity has become less, and the risk of susceptibility to diseases among people has increased. Some researchers suggest that wandering abroad may be a cure for some disorders. Of course, in not a foolproof cure, but it might help feel better, both physically and psychologically. So, travel more, and be healthy without any drug, trust me.
To sum up and recapitulate, by following all the aforementioned reasons to consider, I believe we should not only be travel to our country but also journey to other countries as far as possible. Although both traveling have benefits, traveling to foreign countries, have more benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, at least, of course, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90752688172 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66310375926 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539784946237 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4969946103 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.28 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425890093061 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122955913466 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090093727663 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255446832477 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823063332261 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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