Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of humanity, life is considered full of variation based on different perspective. Some people think it is very enjoyable, on the other hand, some are considering it as a lack of adventure. According to the psychologist, it varies because of our deeds, what are chosen by at different stages of our lives. Some people are very passionate about their jobs as it is what they wanted to where it seems like a regular activity to others whether it is according to their will or not, and such kind of people are sometimes in a stage to complain about their lives. So, I, for one, love to advocate to do a job if I get Happiness from it. In a word, the work should not continue in where one can not get enjoyment. For two conspicuous reasons, I am compelling it under.
The first justification is, an astounding performance is the only key to get happiness. To see the inner beauty of a job done by one is only possible if he gets the chance to do it according to his own will. My father would be a great example of this. At the early stage of my father, served as a school teacher as it was very honorable that period of time of him. But he always wanted to be a successful businessman, which was not cordially received by my grandfather. Day after day, he was getting like a robot what did not know how to even teach normally. Soon the superior of him talked to my grandfather and made him give permission to my father doing business. Within a couple of years, he attained quite a reputation through it. And now he is considered as an idol to the young business folks. That is why people should do what they wanted to.
On top of that, Life is full of different kinds of waves, some might be good on the other hand, some might be worse than we expect. Beyond that, it very important that we are not getting bored with our lives. Because if that happens, then it could be turned out in different wages of disastrous things for instance Suicide is the most extensive effect of it. For example, during my medical school, one of my senior commit suicide because of getting irritated with the huge syllabus of medical school. Later we found out that, he always wanted to be a singer, which was not allowed to by his parents. If he got the chance to explore himself, this we did not have to see this worse.
It is very important to do according to our own will. if we are not interested in a particular job, we should give it up. because it could be a barrier to our way to success could be a reason of life taking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...l teacher as it was very honorable that period of time of him. But he always wanted to be a su...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ortant to do according to our own will. if we are not interested in a particular j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31302521008 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52947719701 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483193277311 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6247145805 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9615384615 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114864461578 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03502768389 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05539899927 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744110705659 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300738950566 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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